Not bad, just....
The animation and sounds were good, but it took you far too long to make this so waiting for a sequel seems pointless, and it was too dam small, FIX it...
Dude, Ur Messed Up.....
Seriously, Really messed up..... Terrible graphics too
In a word... Inspiring...
I Would Like to say how powerful that piece was, not oonly on the animation side, but also towards to emotional development as well.
The Graphics were truly Phenomenal, an extreamly well thought out piece, the Special FXs were very good, but i'm afraid that i couldn't give you any higher than A 8 Because it was simply a sprite movie, and sprites are very Disillusioning close-up.
Your style, Well, needless to say was remarkable... your use of speech banners was a very good choice. Sound... 10/10, Simply because you knew WHEN to use each sound, not even the fighting effects, any good animator can do that, but the songs, to choose a perfect song out of every choice available is a very difficult feat to reach. (The "Dance With My Father" Song is a very powerful song in itself, but used in context is beyond words... Although, i am a little unsure who Recorded that PARTICUALAR version.)
The Violence is pretty self-explanatory, however, to reach a 10/10 you need to incorperate more use of gore, blood that stains the floor etc... (But Incorperating those in this piece would've ruined the entire effect of it.)
Humor..hehe, I'll give you 3Marks just for that comment that Ryu Makes After his fall "Thats gonna Leave A mark"... Well Timed!!)
Congratulations, I feel that Tom Fulp Would agree with me on this one: "You'll be a valued member on Newgrounds and I Look VERY forward to your next Animation.
P.S. I Would Like to Just Disagree with OptimusRhyme, Just because SF keeps beating MK, it doesn't make the animator biased, it's just how the the animator has chosen to Incorperate the story
Thank You For Reading...
Really well done.
I have no idea why you decided to make this, but whatever brain-cell had the final say... BUY IT A BIG RED CAKE!! lol
No really, you deserved top of the Portal
Ok, I like some of the changes.. Not perfect yet..
6/10 simply because i like your playing style and lyrics have meaning.
I still don't like that small chordal run though, it just destroys the feel that you have established.
I'll PM you with ideas, respond ASAP
Charlie Knight AKA OCELOT3000
You wanted a review, here it is!!
I can't say anything truely evil about it I suppose, not the way I would've gone about it but nice none the less. I've listened to the lyrics and i can understand what you mean, i'm sure that their are plenty of people that know what you mean when you say things like "jump on the chances when you get them" Deep.. ok, to the point but it works.
I like ideas in this, such as the eagles methods which you may bee unaware of like tapping on a guitar body, (i can only assume that is what you're doing) and it woks well but a few ideas that you might want to consider:
1. First and formost, SINGING, if you're trying to convince someone on something then you have to scream it to the heavens not whimper it like you're pondering you're own existance, If your Forte is towards singing, then hire someone to do it for you. It's hard to find one that you like but it's always worth it in the end.
2. That little run of chords towards the end after "live them".... no, i don't like it.. ok the way that you finished with "live for today" was good but those strings of chords just don't work, If you wanted to create a different feel there then might I suggest adding a harmonised vocal line or another guitar line, possibly with a slight bit of overdrive on?? that could work.
3. Also, on a personal not there are parts where you're not singing and the guitar is starting to get boring so put something in there, a "ghost track" with a few guitar fills work work well there.
P.S. Long shot, but if you want a hand or want to know how i'd do it then take ideas from it then send me a message to my account and e-mail me the chords, lyrics and anything else and i'll directly e-mail you back the finished copy.
U CALL THAT EFFORT, Importing a MIDI file into FL, changing the generators then classing it as a re-mix.....
Freddie Mercury Would Roll over in his grave if he could hear this.
No Excuse For that.....
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